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Encountering Racism in Literature? Have I encountered it? Sure, I have. Part II

The Novel: UnHoly Pursuit: Devil on my Trail

This person and I were communicating fine with the first couple of letters exchanged. There was no pressure or timeline for a review. Out of the blues they send this nasty letter.


Proof___ R___ c—–@editoral.com

Nov 09, 2019, 1:42 PM

to me
Hello A,

Those who gave you ravishing reviews simply took pity on you for all your hard work. Yes, the contents are original. That’s true. But your books are very poorly written. You constantly change from present tense to past tense verbs. There’s too much switching up. You move too much from one time span to another. There are lots and lots of grammatical errors, and the story in the first ten pages doesn’t make a lot of sense to me. Seems like you’re trying to write a fantasy story mixed with an action story, mixed with the story of a poor black woman and her little girl…

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